2014년 10월 23일 목요일

First draft introduction

People in Korea always think about Unification. Korea is the only divided country since 1990 when the Berlin barrier was destroyed. For a long time, Korea unification has been discussed, but it was failed because there are lots of difference between North Korea and South Korea. However, Korea unification is still considered now, then some people agree with this resolution and some people disagree with it. I'm on the affirmative side, so I strongly believe that North and South Korea should reunify. There are lots of problem when Korea do not reunify. First, Korea men have to go to army. Then, they can't contribute to economy. Second, Korea people will always live in a danger of the war. Third, there are a lot of separated families in Korea. Then what is the advantage when Korea unify? South Korea's technology and North Korea's resource meet and it can contribute to our economy enormously. Second, Korea can contribute to world peace. Now, Korea is the only divided country in the world, so people in Korea always scare about the war, but if Korea unify, we don't have to scare about it. Besides these benefits, there are a lot of advantage when Korea reunify, so I strongly agree with this resolution.

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