week 11 Self-Evaluation

1. My point is 1 point because my essay is not long and I think I'm poor at writing essay logically.

2.what did you do well?

I think that I choose great topic of my essay. In Korea reunification is the most important issue.  I'm happy that i can write about this important topic.

3. what could you have done better?

I could write much better , but i don't have enough time to write better essay. I could write more logically

4. which part of the classical argument did you the best?

The best classical argument was we can keep world peace through reunification.

5. which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

The most poor argument was Korea can be strong economical country in the world.

6. what's your strategy to make your second draft better?

My strategy for second draft is writing more logically.